Short Story: The Magic Hiding in Maths Class
The Magic Hiding in Maths Class
Chapter 1: The Numbers That Wouldn't Behave
Finn O'Sullivan had always hated mathematics with the sort of passionate
intensity that most people reserved for Brussels sprouts, having to clean their
bedrooms, or listening to his little sister practice the violin. Numbers seemed to
mock him from the pages of his exercise book, arranging themselves into
equations that made absolutely no sense and problems that appeared to have been
designed by someone who actively disliked children.
"Right then, Year Six," announced Mr. Peters, their mathematics
teacher, as he wrote a series of increasingly complicated-looking problems on
the whiteboard with the enthusiasm of someone who genuinely believed that
fractions were the most fascinating thing in the universe. "Today we're
going to explore the wonderful world of fractions, decimals, and percentages.
Who can tell me what three-quarters looks like as a decimal?"
Finn slumped lower in his seat, hoping to become invisible or possibly to
spontaneously develop the ability to teleport himself anywhere else in the
world. Around him, eager hands shot into the air like rockets, Rosie Picket
waving hers frantically as if she was trying to flag down a rescue helicopter,
Tommy Fletcher practically bouncing in his chair with mathematical enthusiasm,
and Melanie Wells already scribbling calculations in her notebook as if
mathematics was the most natural thing in the world.
"0.75!" called out Rosie when Mr. Peters pointed to her, her voice
ringing with the confidence of someone who had never met a number she couldn't
understand.
"Excellent! And as a percentage?"
"Seventy-five per cent!" chorused several voices in perfect unison,
while Finn stared at the numbers on the board as if they were written in
ancient Egyptian hieroglyphs or possibly an alien language designed
specifically to torture eleven-year-old boys who just wanted to get through
Year 6 without completely humiliating themselves.
How did three-quarters become 0.75? How did that magically transform into
seventy-five per cent? The numbers seemed to shape-shift according to mysterious
rules that everyone else had apparently been born understanding, but which
remained as incomprehensible to him as advanced rocket science.
"Now then," Mr. Peters continued, his voice filled with the sort of
infectious enthusiasm that suggested he genuinely believed mathematics was more
exciting than Christmas morning, "I want you all to work through the
problems on page forty-seven. Remember, mathematics is just another language, once you learn to speak it fluently, it becomes as natural as English."
Finn opened his textbook to page forty-seven and immediately felt his heart
sink into his shoes. The page was covered with word problems that seemed to
have been specifically designed to make his brain hurt and his confidence
shrivel:
Sarah has 3/4 of a chocolate bar. She gives 1/8 to her brother and 2/5 to her
sister. How much chocolate does she have left?
A recipe calls for 2.5 cups of flour. If you want to make half the recipe, how
much flour do you need?
In a class of 28 students, 25% wear glasses. How many students is that?
Each problem felt like a puzzle written in a foreign language by someone who
had clearly never been eleven years old and confused about everything. Finn
stared at the first question, trying to make sense of how you could possibly
give away 1/8 and 2/5 of something when you only had 3/4 to begin with. Were
Sarah's siblings mathematical wizards who could accept fractional chocolate?
The fractions swirled around in his head like alphabet soup in a blender.
Around him, his classmates were already working with the focused intensity of
mathematical geniuses, their pencils scratching across paper as they solved
problems with apparent ease. Finn picked up his pencil, wrote "Sarah has
3/4 of a chocolate bar" in his exercise book, then stared at it
helplessly, wondering what magical transformation was supposed to happen next.
Chapter 2: The Wish That Changed Everything
"This is hopeless," Finn muttered under his breath, his voice barely
audible above the sound of productive mathematical activity surrounding him.
"I'm never going to understand this. Everyone else gets it, and I'm
just... stupid."
The word hung in the air like a dark cloud, and Finn felt the familiar weight
of mathematical failure settling on his shoulders. He'd been struggling with
numbers since Year 4, watching his classmates race ahead while he remained
stuck at the starting line, unable to grasp concepts that seemed to come
naturally to everyone else.
"I wish," he said quietly, his voice carrying the desperate edge of
someone who had tried everything else and was running out of options, "I
wish numbers made sense. I wish mathematics were actually magic, because at
least then I'd understand why nothing adds up properly. Maybe then I wouldn't
feel like the stupidest person in Year 6."
The moment the words left his mouth, something extraordinary happened. The
numbers on his page began to shimmer and glow, as if they were made of golden
light instead of ordinary pencil marks. The fraction 3/4 lifted itself off the
page and hovered in the air above his exercise book, pulsing gently like a tiny
star that had decided to take a break from the night sky.
Finn blinked hard, rubbed his eyes with the back of his hand, and looked again.
The glowing fraction was still there, and now it was joined by 1/8 and 2/5,
which had also detached themselves from the page and were floating in a small
constellation of mathematical symbols above his desk.
"This is impossible," he whispered, glancing around frantically to
see if anyone else had noticed the floating numbers. But his classmates were
all absorbed in their work, and Mr. Peters was helping Tommy with a
particularly tricky decimal conversion at the front of the classroom,
completely oblivious to the supernatural mathematics lesson happening at Finn's
desk.
As Finn watched in fascination and growing excitement, the floating fractions
began to move and rearrange themselves, as if they were trying to communicate
something important. The 3/4 grew larger and brighter, then split into smaller
pieces, eight equal segments that glowed with warm, golden light.
"Oh," Finn breathed, understanding beginning to dawn like sunrise
after a very long night. "Three-quarters means three out of four equal
pieces. It's not just a random number - it's actually showing me what it
means."
The 1/8 fraction floated over to the glowing segments and highlighted one of
them with a gentle pulse of silver light, showing Finn exactly what one-eighth
looked like in relation to the whole chocolate bar. Then the 2/5 did something
even more remarkable - it transformed the entire display, showing him how to
convert everything to the same denominator so he could actually subtract the
pieces that Sarah was giving away.
For the first time in his mathematical life, Finn could see what the numbers
meant instead of just staring at abstract symbols that might as well have been
written in invisible ink. The fractions weren't mysterious codes designed to
torture him, they were clear instructions for dividing things into equal parts
and working with those parts in perfectly logical ways.
Chapter 3: The Breakthrough
"Sarah has... let me see..." Finn worked through the problem step by
step, watching as the floating numbers confirmed each calculation by showing
him the remaining glowing segments. "Three-quarters is the same as
six-eighths, and if you take away one-eighth, you get five-eighths. But then
you have to take away two-fifths, which is..."
The numbers rearranged themselves again, patiently showing him how to convert
2/5 into eighths so he could subtract it properly. The mathematical magic was
teaching him step by step, making visible all the relationships between numbers
that had always been invisible to him before.
"Sixteen-fortieths!" he said aloud, then caught himself and looked
around nervously. But nobody was paying attention to his sudden outburst of
mathematical enthusiasm.
"Finn?" Mr. Peters' voice made him look up with a start, his heart
racing with the fear of being caught doing something wrong. "How are you
getting on with the problems?"
"I... I think I understand fractions now," Finn said, hardly believing
the words as they came out of his mouth. "They're not just numbers,
they're instructions for dividing things up and working with the pieces."
Mr. Peters looked surprised but genuinely pleased. "That's exactly right!
Mathematics is all about relationships and patterns. Once you start seeing the
logic behind the numbers, everything becomes much clearer."
But Finn's newfound mathematical confidence was about to face its first real
test.
"Finn O'Sullivan understanding maths?" scoffed Marcus Blackwood during
break time, his voice carrying the particular cruelty that some children seemed
to develop naturally. "That's a good one. You couldn't add two and two
last week without counting on your fingers."
"Leave him alone, Marcus," said Rosie Picket, but her defence only
made Finn feel worse.
"No, it's fine," Finn said, his cheeks burning with embarrassment.
"I did figure something out. The numbers... they started making
sense."
"Right," Marcus sneered. "And I suppose next you'll be telling
us you can do algebra or something equally ridiculous."
The comment stung because it highlighted exactly what Finn feared - that his
mathematical breakthrough was temporary, that he'd go back to being the class
dunce as soon as the problems got harder. The magical numbers had helped him
with basic fractions, but what about more complex mathematics? What about the
advanced concepts that Year 6 students were expected to master before moving on
to secondary school?
Chapter 4: The Test of Confidence
That afternoon brought Finn's worst nightmare: Mr. Peters announced that they
would be working on a particularly challenging set of problems involving mixed
operations, algebraic thinking, and complex word problems that required
multiple steps to solve.
"Remember," Mr. Peters said as he wrote the first problem on the
whiteboard, "mathematics has its own grammar, just like English. You have
to follow the rules about which operations to do first, or you'll get
completely the wrong answer."
Finn looked at the problem - 3 + 4 × 2 - 6 ÷ 3 + (8 - 5) × 2 - and felt his
newfound confidence begin to crumble. This wasn't simple fractions anymore.
This was the kind of complex calculation that had always made him feel like his
brain was full of cotton wool.
Around him, his classmates were already working, but Finn could hear frustrated
sighs and the sound of erasers being used extensively. Even the mathematical
geniuses were finding this challenging.
"I can't do this," Finn whispered to himself, staring at the intimidating
equation. "It was just a fluke this morning. I'm still rubbish at
maths."
But as he watched, something remarkable happened. The numbers on the page began
to glow again, but this time they were pulsing with different colours, gold
for multiplication and division, silver for addition and subtraction, and
brilliant white for the brackets that needed to be solved first.
The mathematical magic was showing him the order of operations not as arbitrary
rules to memorise, but as a logical sequence that made perfect sense. First, the
brackets: (8 - 5) = 3. Then multiplication and division from left to right: 4 ×
2 = 8, then 6 ÷ 3 = 2. Finally, addition and subtraction from left to right: 3
+ 8 - 2 + 3 × 2 = 3 + 8 - 2 + 6 = 15.
"It's like following a recipe," Finn murmured in amazement. "You
have to do things in the right order, or the whole thing falls apart."
But his quiet celebration was interrupted by Marcus, who had finished his own
work and was now peering over Finn's shoulder with obvious scepticism.
"Let me see your workings," Marcus demanded, his voice loud enough to
attract attention from nearby students. "I bet you've got it completely
wrong."
Finn's stomach clenched with anxiety. What if Marcus was right? What if the
magical numbers had led him astray? What if he were about to be publicly
humiliated in front of the entire class?
"The answer's fifteen," Finn said quietly, trying to keep his voice
steady.
Marcus grabbed Finn's exercise book and studied his working with the intensity
of a detective examining evidence. "That's... that's actually right,"
he said, sounding genuinely surprised. "But you must have copied it from
someone else."
"I didn't copy anything," Finn replied, his voice growing stronger.
"I worked it out myself."
"Prove it," Marcus challenged, his voice carrying the particular
nastiness that came from someone who was used to being right and didn't like
having his assumptions challenged. "Do this one." He pointed to
another complex problem on the page.
Chapter 5: Standing Up to the Challenge
A small crowd had gathered around Finn's desk, drawn by the unusual spectacle
of Marcus Blackwood being challenged by someone he'd always considered
mathematically hopeless. Finn felt his palms grow sweaty and his heart start
racing, but the magical numbers were still glowing on his page, still pulsing
with their helpful colours.
"Fine," Finn said, his voice steadier than he felt. "But when I
get it right, you have to admit that maybe I'm not as stupid as you think I
am."
"Deal," Marcus smirked. "But when you get it wrong, you have to
admit that you're just a maths dunce who got lucky once."
The problem Marcus had chosen was even more complex: 2 × (7 + 3) - 4² ÷ 2 + 15%
of 40.
Finn stared at the equation, feeling a moment of panic. This involved brackets,
powers, percentages, and multiple operations. But as he watched, the magical
numbers began their helpful dance, showing him each step with patient clarity.
"Brackets first," he said aloud, his confidence growing as the
numbers guided him. "Seven plus three equals ten. So now it's two times
ten minus four squared divided by two plus fifteen per cent of forty."
The numbers rearranged themselves, showing him the next step.
"Powers next. Four squared is sixteen. So now it's two times ten minus
sixteen divided by two plus fifteen per cent of forty."
Marcus was watching intently, his smirk beginning to fade as Finn worked
through the problem with increasing confidence.
"Multiplication and division from left to right. Two times ten is twenty.
Sixteen divided by two is eight. So now it's twenty minus eight plus fifteen per cent of forty."
"What's fifteen per cent of forty?" Marcus challenged, clearly hoping
to trip him up.
The magical numbers showed Finn how percentages worked - 15% was the same as
15/100, which was the same as 0.15. And 0.15 × 40 = 6.
"Six," Finn said confidently. "Fifteen per cent of forty is
six."
"So the final answer is twenty minus eight plus six, which equals
eighteen."
The small crowd that had gathered around his desk erupted in surprised murmurs.
Even Melanie Wells, who was usually the best at mathematics in their class,
looked impressed.
"That's... that's right," Marcus admitted grudgingly, his face
flushed with embarrassment at being proven wrong so publicly.
"How did you do that?" asked Rosie Picket, her eyes wide with
amazement. "Yesterday, you couldn't even remember your times tables
properly."
Finn glanced at his exercise book, where the numbers were still glowing softly
with magical light that only he could see. "I figured out that mathematics
isn't about memorising rules," he said carefully. "It's about
understanding what the numbers are actually trying to tell you."
Chapter 6: The Ripple Effect
Word of Finn's mathematical transformation spread through Year 6 like wildfire.
By lunchtime, half the class was talking about how Finn O'Sullivan had somehow
become a maths genius overnight. The other half, led by Marcus, was convinced
it was some kind of elaborate trick.
"There's no way he suddenly got good at maths," Marcus declared to
his group of followers as they sat in the playground. "He's been rubbish
at numbers since Year 4. People don't just magically become clever."
"Maybe he's been getting extra help at home," suggested Jenny
Morrison, though she didn't sound entirely convinced.
"Or maybe," said Marcus with the particular nastiness that came from
having his mathematical superiority challenged, "he's cheating somehow.
Nobody goes from dunce to genius in one morning."
The accusations reached Finn during afternoon registration, delivered by Marcus
with the cruel precision of someone who knew exactly how to hurt.
"Everyone knows you're cheating, O'Sullivan," Marcus hissed as they
lined up for their next lesson. "Whatever trick you're using, we'll figure
it out eventually."
"I'm not cheating," Finn replied, but his voice lacked conviction.
How could he explain that numbers had started glowing and floating around his
desk? How could he tell anyone that mathematics had literally become magical
without sounding completely mental?
"Prove it then," Marcus challenged. "If you're really good at
maths now, you won't mind helping me with my homework tonight. Unless you're
too scared that your little trick won't work when I'm watching."
Finn felt trapped. If he refused, everyone would assume Marcus was right about
the cheating. If he agreed and the magical numbers didn't appear when he needed
them, he'd be exposed as a fraud in front of the most popular boy in Year 6.
"Fine," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. "Fine,"
he said, his voice barely above a whisper. "I'll help you with your
homework. But when I get the answers right, you have to stop saying I'm
cheating."
"Deal," Marcus replied with a confident smirk. "This should be
entertaining."
The rest of the afternoon passed in a blur of anxiety for Finn. What if the
magical numbers only worked during lessons? What if they disappeared when he
needed them most? What if Marcus was right, and his morning breakthrough had
just been a lucky fluke?
During their final lesson of the day - English literature, which Finn normally
enjoyed - he found himself staring at his mathematics textbook, willing the
numbers to glow again. But they remained stubbornly ordinary, black marks on
white paper that offered no hint of the magic he'd experienced earlier.
"Finn," said Mrs. Williams, their English teacher, "you seem
rather distracted today. Is everything alright?"
"Sorry, Mrs. Williams," Finn mumbled, quickly shoving his maths book
into his bag. "Just thinking about... homework."
Several of his classmates snickered at this obvious lie. Finn O'Sullivan
thinking about homework voluntarily was about as likely as pigs learning to
fly.
Chapter 7: The Evening Challenge
That evening, Finn sat at his kitchen table with Marcus and Marcus's usual
entourage - Jenny Morrison, David Clarke, and Sophie Hartwell - all of whom had
come to witness what Marcus was convinced would be Finn's public mathematical
humiliation.
"Right then," Marcus said with theatrical authority, spreading his
mathematics homework across the table like a general planning a battle.
"Let's see this amazing mathematical genius in action."
Finn's mum had offered to make everyone hot chocolate, clearly pleased that her
son was finally showing interest in studying with classmates. She had no idea
that this was less a study session and more a trial by mathematics.
"Start with this one," Marcus commanded, pointing to a particularly
nasty-looking problem involving percentages, fractions, and decimals all mixed
together. "A shop reduces all prices by 15%. If a jumper originally costs
£24.80, what's the sale price?"
Finn stared at the problem, his heart sinking. This was exactly the kind of
multi-step calculation that had always defeated him. But as he focused on the
numbers, something wonderful happened - they began to glow again, soft golden
light emanating from the page.
The magical numbers showed him that 15% was the same as 15/100, which was the
same as 0.15. They demonstrated how to calculate 15% of £24.80 by multiplying
24.80 × 0.15 = 3.72. Then they showed him how to subtract that discount from
the original price: £24.80 - £3.72 = £21.08.
"Twenty-one pounds and eight pence," Finn said confidently, watching
as the magical numbers confirmed his calculation with a warm pulse of light.
Marcus checked the answer against his calculator, his confident expression
beginning to waver. "That's... correct," he admitted reluctantly.
"Lucky guess," muttered David Clarke. "Try another one."
"Fine," Marcus said, his voice taking on a harder edge. "This
one's much more difficult." He pointed to a complex word problem that took
up half a page and involved multiple steps, fractions, and percentages, all
combined in a way that looked deliberately confusing.
Finn read the problem carefully, feeling his anxiety spike. This was the kind
of question that had always made him want to give up entirely. But the magical
numbers were already beginning to glow, breaking the complex problem down into
manageable steps and showing him how each piece connected to the others.
Chapter 8: The Turning Point
As Finn worked through the complex problem step by step, explaining his
reasoning aloud while the magical numbers guided him through each calculation,
something shifted in the atmosphere around the kitchen table. Marcus's
confident smirk gradually faded, replaced by grudging respect and growing
confusion.
"How are you doing this?" Marcus asked finally, his voice lacking its
usual mocking tone. "You're getting everything right, and you're
explaining it better than Mr. Peters does."
"I told you," Finn replied, his confidence growing with each
successful calculation. "I figured out how to see what the numbers are
actually showing me. Mathematics isn't about memorising rules - it's about
understanding relationships."
"But you were terrible at maths last week," Jenny Morrison said, her
voice puzzled rather than accusatory. "You couldn't even do basic
multiplication without getting confused."
"I was terrible because I was trying to memorise everything instead of
understanding it," Finn explained, watching as the magical numbers danced
across his homework page. "Once you see the patterns and connections,
everything makes sense."
Sophie Hartwell leaned forward, genuinely interested now. "Can you show me
how you do it? I'm good at maths usually, but some of these problems are really
confusing."
For the next hour, Finn found himself in the unexpected position of tutoring
his classmates. The magical numbers helped him explain concepts in ways that
made sense, showing him how to break down complex problems into simple steps
and how to help others see the logical connections he was learning to
recognise.
"You know what?" Marcus said as they packed up their books, his voice
carrying a note of genuine apology. "I was wrong about you cheating.
You're actually really good at explaining this stuff."
"Thanks," Finn replied, feeling a warm glow of satisfaction that had
nothing to do with magical numbers. "I think I just needed to find the
right way to understand it."
"Would you... Would you mind helping me with maths sometimes?" Marcus
asked, his usual arrogance replaced by something approaching humility. "I
mean, if you don't mind. I know I was horrible to you earlier."
Finn looked at Marcus - really looked at him - and saw something he'd never
noticed before. Behind the confident facade and cruel comments was someone who
was just as worried about academic failure as everyone else, someone who used
mockery to hide his own insecurities.
"Of course," Finn said simply. "That's what friends do."
Chapter 9: The Magic Spreads
Over the following weeks, Finn's transformation from mathematical disaster to
numerical wizard became the talk of Year 6. But more importantly, his
willingness to help others and his patient explanations began to change the
entire classroom dynamic.
Students who had always struggled with mathematics found themselves
understanding concepts for the first time. Those who had been confident but
competitive discovered the joy of collaborative learning. Even Mr. Peters
noticed the change, commenting on how much more supportive and encouraging the
class had become.
"There's something different about the atmosphere in here," he
observed one afternoon as he watched Finn help a group of students work through
a particularly challenging geometry problem. "Everyone seems more willing
to take risks and ask questions."
"Finn makes it feel safe to not understand things immediately,"
explained Melanie Wells. "He shows us that it's okay to be confused at
first, as long as you keep trying to figure it out."
The magical numbers continued to reveal their secrets to Finn, but he was
learning to rely on them less and less. The patterns and relationships they had
shown him were becoming second nature, and he could often solve problems
without supernatural assistance.
More importantly, he was discovering that the real magic wasn't in the glowing
numbers themselves, but in the confidence and understanding they had helped him
develop. Mathematics had transformed from his greatest academic enemy into a
subject he genuinely enjoyed and excelled at.
Chapter 10: The Greatest Discovery
The end-of-term mathematics assessment arrived with the usual mixture of
excitement and terror that accompanied all major tests. Finn sat in the quiet
examination room, looking at problems that would have seemed impossible to him
at the beginning of the year, and felt calm and confident for the first time in
his academic life.
The numbers on the page glowed softly, not providing him with answers but
showing him the relationships and patterns that would help him find the
solutions himself. Fractions revealed their connections to decimals and
percentages. Word problems broke themselves down into logical steps. Complex
calculations showed him how they were built from simple operations arranged in
systematic ways.
But halfway through the test, something unexpected happened. The magical glow
began to fade from the numbers, growing dimmer and dimmer until it disappeared
entirely. For a moment, Finn felt panic rising in his chest. Without the
magical assistance, would he revert to his old mathematical confusion?
Then he looked at the problem he'd been working on, a complex calculation
involving multiple steps and different types of numbers, and realised
something wonderful. He could still see the patterns. He could still understand
the relationships. The magic hadn't disappeared; it had become part of him.
The glowing numbers had been training wheels, helping him learn to see
mathematical logic until he could recognise it on his own. Now that he truly
understood how numbers worked together, he no longer needed supernatural
assistance to solve problems.
When the results came back, Finn had achieved the highest mathematics score in
his class - not through magical shortcuts, but through genuine understanding of
mathematical principles and relationships.
"I'm so proud of you," Mr. Peters said as he handed Finn his marked
paper. "Your improvement this term has been remarkable. More importantly,
you've developed a real understanding of mathematical thinking that will serve
you well throughout your education."
"Thank you," Finn replied, looking down at his paper covered with
correct answers and clear working. "I finally understand that mathematics
isn't about being naturally clever or having a special talent. It's about
seeing the magic in how numbers work together and being patient enough to let
them show you their secrets."
Epilogue: The Magic Lives On
That evening, as Finn sat at his desk working on mathematics problems that he
now found genuinely enjoyable, he reflected on his journey from mathematical
confusion to numerical confidence. The magical numbers no longer glowed and
danced across his pages, but he could still feel their presence, a warm
certainty that mathematics was his friend rather than his enemy.
"Thank you," he said quietly to his exercise book, where equations
solved themselves with elegant logic and numbers arranged themselves in beautiful,
meaningful patterns. "Thank you for showing me that mathematics isn't
about being clever or stupid. Thank you for teaching me that every number has a
story, every equation has a purpose, and every problem has a solution if you're
willing to look for the magic hiding in the logic."
The next day at school, Marcus approached Finn's desk with a humility that
would have been unthinkable just weeks before.
"Finn," he said quietly, "I owe you an apology. Not just for
yesterday, but for all the times I made you feel stupid about maths. You're
actually brilliant at it, and you're a really good teacher too."
"We're all good at different things," Finn replied generously.
"You're brilliant at creative writing, and Jenny's amazing at science. I
just needed to find my way with numbers."
"Would you still help me with maths homework?" Marcus asked
hopefully. "I promise I'll stop being such an idiot about it."
"Of course," Finn smiled. "That's what friends do."
Because Finn O'Sullivan had learned the most important lesson of all: that
mathematics wasn't a collection of arbitrary rules designed to separate clever
students from stupid ones, but a beautiful language that described the patterns
and relationships that governed everything in the universe. And once you learned
to speak that language, once you could see the magic hiding in the logic, the
whole world became a more comprehensible and wonderful place.
The magic hiding in maths class had taught Finn that numbers weren't his
enemies but his allies, ready to reveal their secrets to anyone patient and
curious enough to look beyond the surface and discover the elegant logic that
connected everything together in one magnificent, mathematical whole.
And sometimes, the greatest magic of all was helping others discover that same
wonder and confidence in themselves.
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