Short Story: The Halloween That Wouldn't End
Chapter 1: The
Morning After
Penny stretched beneath her duvet, her body aching in places
she didn’t know could ache. Last night had been incredible, the best Halloween
Hallow had ever seen. Her parents had actually been home, actually
participated, actually made it special. The whole street had transformed into
something magical and terrifying, with fog machines pumping out thick mist that
clung to ankles, projection mapping turning houses into haunted mansions, and
actors in the most realistic costumes Penny had ever seen.
She smiled, remembering the skeleton that had chased Pippa
down the street, her ten-year-old sister screaming with delighted terror. Even
Phillipa, who was fourteen and far too cool for family fun, had admitted it was
“actually decent” before disappearing with her friends.
Penny’s alarm hadn’t gone off yet, but something had woken
her. A sound, maybe? She lay still, listening. There it was again, a scraping
noise, like fingernails on wood, coming from downstairs.
“Pippa, stop messing about,” she called out, her voice thick
with sleep.
The scraping stopped.
Penny sat up, rubbing her eyes. Grey morning light filtered
through her curtains, the kind of dim, heavy light that came with November
mornings in the North East. She reached for her phone. 6:47am. Too early, but
she was awake now.
She padded to her window and pulled back the curtain.
Her breath caught in her throat.
The street below was still decorated for Halloween. That
wasn’t unusual, lots of people left decorations up for a day or two. But these
decorations were moving. The giant spider web stretched across the Hendersons’
front garden was rippling, though there was no wind. The inflatable ghost in
the Patels’ yard was swaying, but its movements were wrong, too fluid, too
purposeful.
And the fog. The fog machines must still be running because
thick, grey mist rolled down the street like a living thing, pooling in
gardens, creeping up driveways, pressing against front doors.
“Weird,” Penny muttered, but her heart was beating faster
than it should.
The scraping sound started again, louder this time, more
insistent.
Penny left her room and crept onto the landing. Pippa’s door
was closed, and she could hear her little sister’s gentle snoring. Phillipa’s
door was open a crack, her older sister’s room dark and silent.
The scraping was definitely coming from downstairs.
“Mum? Dad?” Penny called, her voice smaller than she’d
intended.
No answer.
She descended the stairs slowly, her hand gripping the
bannister. The house felt different, colder somehow, and the air tasted
strange, like metal and old leaves.
The scraping stopped as she reached the bottom step.
The living room was a mess from last night’s party, plastic
cups and paper plates scattered across surfaces, the smell of crisps and
chocolate lingering. The patio doors that led to the back garden were closed,
but something was pressed against the glass.
A handprint. No, not a handprint. Too long, too thin,
fingers that stretched impossibly far down the glass, leaving smears of
something dark and wet.
Penny’s mouth went dry.
“This isn’t funny,” she said to the empty room, but her
voice shook.
The handprint began to move, sliding down the glass with
that awful scraping sound, leaving a trail behind it. Then another handprint
appeared beside it. And another.
Penny backed away, her heart hammering. This was a joke, it
had to be. Someone from last night was playing a prank, maybe some of Phillipa’s
friends were trying to scare them.
But the hands were on the outside of the glass, and their
garden was enclosed by a two-metre fence.
The patio doors rattled.
Penny ran.
She took the stairs two at a time, burst into Pippa’s room
and shook her sister awake.
“Pippa, wake up, something’s wrong!”
Pippa groaned, pulling her pillow over her head. “Go away,
it’s too early.”
“I’m serious, there’s something outside, something wrong!”
“It’s just leftover Halloween stuff, Penny. Go back to bed.”
Penny wanted to argue, wanted to drag Pippa to the window
and make her look, but a sound from downstairs stopped her. A clicking, tapping
sound, like something hard on the wooden floor.
Footsteps.
But not human footsteps.
“Pippa,” Penny whispered, “please.”
Something in her voice must have got through because Pippa
sat up, rubbing her eyes. “What’s wrong with you?”
“Listen.”
They both fell silent. The clicking, tapping sounds were
getting closer, moving through the living room, into the hallway, approaching
the stairs.
Pippa’s eyes widened. “What is that?”
“I don’t know.”
The clicking stopped at the bottom of the stairs.
Penny held her breath, every muscle in her body tense.
Beside her, Pippa had gone very still, her hand finding Penny’s and squeezing
tight.
Then, slowly, deliberately, whatever was at the bottom of
the stairs began to climb.
Click. Tap. Click. Tap.
One step.
Click. Tap. Click. Tap.
Two steps.
“Phillipa,” Penny breathed, and without another word, both
girls bolted from Pippa’s room and into their older sister’s bedroom, slamming
the door behind them.
Phillipa jerked awake, her hair a wild mess, mascara smudged
under her eyes. “What the hell?”
“Something’s in the house,” Penny gasped.
“Something’s coming upstairs,” Pippa added, her voice high
and tight.
Phillipa looked at them both like they’d lost their minds,
but then the clicking, tapping sound reached the landing, and her expression
changed.
“Where are Mum and Dad?” she asked, suddenly alert.
Penny’s stomach dropped. She hadn’t checked their parents’
room. Hadn’t even thought about it.
“I don’t know.”
The three sisters stared at Phillipa’s door. The clicking,
tapping had stopped, but they could hear something else now, a wet, rasping
sound, like breathing through a throat full of water.
“This isn’t happening,” Phillipa whispered, but she was
already reaching for her phone, her fingers shaking as she tried to unlock it.
“This isn’t real.”
The door handle began to turn.
Chapter 2: What
Walks in Daylight
“Don’t let it in!” Pippa shrieked, and all three girls threw
themselves against the door just as something on the other side pushed.
The force was enormous, inhuman. Penny’s feet slid on the
carpet as whatever was out there shoved harder. Phillipa braced her shoulder
against the wood, her face twisted with effort.
“What is it?” Pippa sobbed. “What is it?”
“I don’t know, just push!”
The wet, rasping breathing grew louder, and then a voice, if
you could call it that, spoke through the door. The words were wrong, backwards
somehow, syllables that hurt to hear.
“Kcab og. Kcab og. Emit s’ti.”
“It’s speaking,” Phillipa gasped. “Oh God, it’s actually
speaking.”
The pressure on the door suddenly released, and the three
girls stumbled forward, catching themselves before they fell. The breathing
sound moved away, the clicking, tapping retreating down the landing.
For a moment, nobody moved. Then Phillipa grabbed Penny’s
arm, her grip painful. “What did you see downstairs? Tell me exactly what you
saw.”
Penny’s words tumbled out, the handprints on the glass, the
fog, the decorations moving on their own. As she spoke, Phillipa’s face grew
paler.
“The fog,” Phillipa said. “Last night, do you remember the
fog?”
“The fog machines, yeah, everyone had them.”
“No, not the machines. The fog that came after. Really late,
when most people had gone home. It rolled in from nowhere, really thick, really
cold. Me and Jess were outside, and we saw…” She trailed off, shaking her head.
“We thought we were imagining it. We thought it was part of the show.”
“Saw what?” Penny pressed.
“Things in the fog. Shapes. People, but not people. They
were just standing there, watching. And when the fog cleared, they were gone.”
A cold feeling settled in Penny’s stomach. “What time did
the fog come?”
“Just after midnight. Right after Halloween ended.”
“Or,” Pippa said quietly, her voice small, “right after
Halloween should have ended.”
The three sisters looked at each other, the same terrible
understanding dawning on all their faces.
“We need to find Mum and Dad,” Penny said.
Phillipa nodded, moving to her bedside table and pulling out
a hockey stick. “Right. Stay together, stay quiet.”
They opened the door carefully, peering out onto the
landing. Empty. The clicking, tapping sounds had stopped, but the house felt
wrong, the air too thick, the shadows too dark despite the grey morning light.
Their parents’ bedroom door was closed. Phillipa reached it
first, knocked softly. “Mum? Dad?”
No answer.
She tried the handle. Locked.
“Mum!” Phillipa called louder, rattling the handle. “Dad,
are you in there?”
Still nothing.
“Maybe they left early for work?” Pippa suggested, but
nobody believed it.
“The car’s still outside,” Penny said, remembering the view
from her window. “I saw it.”
Phillipa stepped back, raised the hockey stick. “Move.”
She swung hard, the stick connecting with the door handle.
Once, twice, three times. The mechanism broke with a crack, and the door swung
open.
The room was empty. The bed was made, perfectly neat, as if
nobody had slept in it. But on the pillow, written in something dark that
looked horribly like dried blood, were two words:
THEY’RE OURS.
Pippa made a small, hurt sound. Phillipa’s hockey stick
clattered to the floor.
“No,” Penny said, her voice stronger than she felt. “No,
they’re not. Whatever this is, whatever’s happening, we’re going to fix it.”
“How?” Phillipa demanded, her voice cracking. “How are we
supposed to fix this? We don’t even know what this is!”
Penny didn’t have an answer, but she knew they couldn’t stay
in the house. “We need to get outside, see if anyone else is experiencing this.
Maybe the Hendersons, or the Patels, someone must know what’s going on.”
“And if they don’t?” Pippa asked.
“Then we figure it out ourselves.”
The three girls made their way downstairs, Phillipa leading
with her hockey stick, Penny in the middle, Pippa clutching the back of Penny’s
pyjama top. The living room was still a mess, but the handprints on the patio
doors had vanished, leaving only smears.
The front door was their goal. Just get outside, get to the
neighbours, find help.
Penny reached for the door handle.
It was ice cold, so cold it burned. She yanked her hand back
with a gasp.
“What?” Phillipa demanded.
“It’s freezing, I can’t,”
“Let me.” Phillipa grabbed a tea towel from the kitchen,
wrapped it around her hand, and tried the handle. It turned, but the door
wouldn’t open. She pulled harder. Nothing.
“It’s stuck.”
“Try the back door,” Pippa suggested.
They moved to the kitchen, to the door that led to the back
garden. Same problem. Ice cold handle, door that wouldn’t budge.
“The windows,” Penny said, moving to the kitchen window. She
tried to open it, but it was sealed shut, as if the frame had been welded.
They tried every window on the ground floor. All sealed.
“We’re trapped,” Pippa whispered.
“No,” Phillipa said firmly, though her face was white. “No,
there has to be a way out. The upstairs windows, we can climb down.”
They raced back upstairs, tried Penny’s window first.
Sealed. Pippa’s window. Sealed. Phillipa’s window. Sealed.
“This isn’t possible,” Phillipa said, her voice rising.
“This isn’t possible!”
Penny pressed her face to her bedroom window, looking out at
the street. The fog was thicker now, rolling in waves, and through it she could
see other houses. The Hendersons’ house, the Patels’ house, the Johnsons’
house.
Every single one had handprints on the windows.
“We’re not the only ones,” Penny said. “Look.”
Her sisters joined her at the window, staring out at the
street they’d lived on their whole lives, now transformed into something from a
nightmare.
And then the fog parted, just for a moment, and Penny saw
them.
Figures standing in the street. Tall, impossibly thin, their
bodies wrong, joints bending in ways that made her eyes hurt. They wore
tattered clothes that might have once been costumes, Halloween costumes, but
now they were something else, something real.
One of them turned its head, and even from this distance,
Penny could see its face.
It had no eyes, just empty sockets that leaked darkness. Its
mouth was too wide, stretched in a grin that showed too many teeth.
And it was looking directly at her.
“Get down!” Penny hissed, pulling her sisters away from the
window.
They crouched on the floor, hearts pounding.
“What were those things?” Pippa breathed.
“I don’t know,” Penny said, “but I think they’re what took
Mum and Dad.”
“Then we need to get them back,” Phillipa said, and despite
her fear, there was steel in her voice. “Whatever it takes, we get them back.”
Penny nodded. “Agreed. But first, we need to understand
what’s happening. Why is Halloween still here? Why won’t it end?”
As if in answer, a sound drifted through the sealed windows,
through the walls, through the very air itself.
Laughter. Children’s laughter, high and sweet and utterly
wrong.
And underneath it, a voice, the same backwards voice from
before, now multiplied, dozens of voices speaking as one:
“Nwod edispu, thgir si gnorw. Yats lliw niatnuom eht, enog
si nus eht. Sruoy era ew, sruoy era yeht.”
Penny didn’t speak the words, didn’t understand them, but
somehow, deep in her bones, she knew what they meant.
Halloween wasn’t over.
Halloween was never going to be over.
Not unless they found a way to end it.
Chapter 3: The
Rules of the Game
The three sisters sat in Phillipa’s room, the door
barricaded with her chest of drawers. It felt safer there, away from the
windows, away from the things in the street.
Phillipa had her laptop open, frantically searching for
information, but the internet was acting strangely. Websites loaded slowly, if
at all, and when they did, the content was wrong. News sites showed headlines
from years ago. Social media feeds were frozen on posts from last night,
everyone celebrating Halloween, everyone having fun.
“This is useless,” Phillipa muttered, slamming the laptop
shut. “It’s like the internet’s stuck in time.”
“Maybe it is,” Penny said quietly. “Maybe everything is.”
Pippa was sitting on the bed, hugging her knees to her
chest. She’d been quiet since they’d seen the creatures in the street, her
usual chatter replaced by a frightened silence that worried Penny more than
anything.
“Pippa,” Penny said gently, sitting beside her little
sister. “Talk to me. What are you thinking?”
“Last night,” Pippa said, her voice barely above a whisper,
“when that skeleton was chasing me, I thought it was funny. But Penny, its
bones were real. I could hear them clicking when it moved. And its eyes, they
weren’t lights or projections, they were actually glowing.”
“Why didn’t you say anything?”
“Because it was Halloween! Everything’s supposed to be scary
and weird on Halloween. I thought that’s just how good the costumes were.”
Pippa looked up, tears in her eyes. “But they weren’t costumes, were they?”
“No,” Penny said softly. “I don’t think they were.”
Phillipa was pacing now, her mind clearly working. “Okay,
let’s think about this logically. Last night, Halloween, everything was normal
until midnight. Then the fog came, and these things appeared. This morning,
we’re trapped, Mum and Dad are gone, and those creatures are outside. There has
to be a pattern, a reason.”
“The backwards voice,” Penny said suddenly. “It keeps saying
things backwards. What if that’s a clue?”
“What did it say?” Phillipa asked.
Penny tried to remember. “Kcab og. Kcab og. Emit s’ti.”
Phillipa grabbed a pen and paper, wrote it down, then
flipped it. “Go back. Go back. It’s time.”
“Go back where?” Pippa asked.
“And the longer one,” Penny continued, “Nwod edispu, thgir
si gnorw. Yats lliw niatnuom eht, enog si nus eht. Sruoy era ew, sruoy era
yeht.”
Phillipa wrote faster, her hand shaking. When she flipped
it, her face went pale.
“What does it say?” Penny demanded.
Phillipa read aloud, her voice hollow. “Upside down, wrong
is right. The mountain will stay, the sun is gone. We are yours, they are
yours.”
The room fell silent.
“What does that mean?” Pippa asked.
“It means,” Penny said slowly, pieces clicking together in
her mind, “that the rules have changed. Everything’s backwards now. Upside
down. Wrong is right.”
“And the sun is gone,” Phillipa added, moving to the window.
She pulled back the curtain. Outside, the sky was the same grey it had been
since dawn, no lighter, no darker. “It’s not getting brighter. It’s been
morning for over an hour, but the sun hasn’t risen.”
“The mountain will stay,” Pippa said. “What mountain? We
don’t have mountains in Hallow.”
But Penny was remembering something. Last night, in the town
square, there had been a centrepiece for the Halloween celebration. A huge
artificial mountain, made of papier-mâché and chicken wire, decorated to look
like a haunted peak. It had been impressive, towering over the square, with
fake caves and plastic bats and lights that made it glow eerily.
“The Halloween mountain,” Penny said. “In the town square.
That’s what it means.”
“So what, we need to go to the town square?” Phillipa asked.
“Maybe. If that’s where this started, maybe that’s where we
can end it.”
“But how do we get there?” Pippa pointed out. “We’re trapped
in the house.”
Penny thought hard. Wrong is right. Upside down. The rules
have changed.
“What if,” she said slowly, “we’re thinking about this
wrong? We’ve been trying to open doors and windows the normal way. But if
everything’s backwards now, if wrong is right…”
“We need to do the opposite,” Phillipa finished,
understanding dawning on her face. “We need to try to keep them closed.”
It sounded insane, but nothing about this situation was
sane. They went back downstairs, to the front door. This time, instead of
trying to pull it open, Penny pressed against it, as if trying to keep it shut.
The door swung open.
Cold air rushed in, bringing with it the smell of decay and
old earth. The fog swirled on the doorstep, thick and grey and waiting.
“It worked,” Pippa breathed.
“Right,” Phillipa said, gripping her hockey stick tighter.
“We need to get to the town square. It’s about fifteen fifteen-minute walk, but in
this fog, with those things out there…”
“We don’t have a choice,” Penny said. “Mum and Dad are out
there somewhere. We have to try.”
The three sisters stood on the threshold of their home,
looking out at the street that was no longer their street, at the fog that held
horrors they couldn’t imagine.
“Stay together,” Phillipa said. “No matter what happens, we
stay together.”
They stepped out into the fog.
The cold hit Penny immediately, a bone-deep chill that made
her gasp. The fog was thick, so thick she could barely see Phillipa in front of
her, even though her older sister was only a step away.
“Hold hands,” Penny said, reaching for Pippa behind her, for
Phillipa in front. “Don’t let go.”
They moved down the path, through their front gate, onto the
pavement. The street was silent except for their footsteps and their breathing.
The fog muffled everything, turning the world into a grey, formless void.
Penny could feel eyes on them. Watching. Waiting.
“Keep moving,” Phillipa whispered.
They passed the Hendersons’ house. Through the fog, Penny
could see the giant spider web, and now she could see what was caught in it.
Not fake bodies or Halloween decorations.
Real people. Wrapped in silk, unmoving.
“Don’t look,” Phillipa said, her voice tight. “Just keep
walking.”
But Penny had already seen Mrs Henderson’s face, frozen in
terror, eyes wide and staring.
They’re ours, the message had said. They are yours.
The creatures had taken everyone. The whole street. Maybe
the whole town.
A shape moved in the fog ahead. Tall, thin, wrong.
“Stop,” Phillipa hissed.
They froze. The shape moved closer, its clicking, tapping
footsteps echoing in the silence. Penny could see it now, its too long limbs,
its eyeless face, its impossible grin.
It stopped right in front of them.
Penny held her breath, squeezed Pippa’s hand so tight it
must have hurt. The creature tilted its head, studying them with its empty
sockets.
Then it spoke, that backwards voice scraping against Penny’s
ears.
“Yalp ot tnaw uoy od?”
Do you want to play?
Before Penny could respond, before any of them could move,
the creature reached out with one impossibly long arm and touched Phillipa’s
forehead.
Phillipa’s eyes rolled back, and she collapsed.
“No!” Penny screamed, dropping to her knees beside her
sister. “Phillipa, wake up!”
But Phillipa was gone, lost in whatever nightmare the
creature had put in her mind.
The creature laughed, that high, sweet, wrong laugh, and
melted back into the fog.
Penny looked up at Pippa, saw her own terror reflected in
her little sister’s face.
“We have to get her to the town square,” Penny said, trying
to keep her voice steady. “We have to end this.”
Together, they lifted Phillipa, each taking an arm, and
dragged their unconscious sister through the fog, towards the town square,
towards the mountain, towards whatever waited for them there.
Behind them, in the fog, more laughter echoed.
The game had begun.
Chapter 4: The Town Square
Dragging Phillipa through the fog was exhausting. She was
dead weight, her body limp and cold, her breathing shallow. Penny and Pippa
stumbled along, their arms aching, their lungs burning from the frigid air.
The fog seemed to press against them, thick and suffocating,
and the silence was worse than any sound. No birds, no cars, no distant voices.
Just the scrape of their feet on the pavement and their ragged breathing.
“How much further?” Pippa gasped.
“I don’t know,” Penny admitted. “Everything looks different
in the fog. I can’t see the street signs.”
They should have reached the high street by now, should have
seen shops and cafes, but there was nothing. Just grey fog and empty streets
and the constant feeling of being watched.
Then, through the fog, Penny saw a light. Faint, flickering,
orange like firelight.
“There,” she said, nodding towards it. “That way.”
They changed direction, moving towards the light. As they
got closer, Penny could make out shapes. Buildings. The town square.
The fog was thinner here, as if something was pushing it
back, and Penny could see the Halloween mountain rising from the centre of the
square. It looked different in the grey light, more real somehow, its
papier-mâché surface textured like actual rock, its painted caves deep and
dark.
And at its base, a fire burned. A real fire, flames
crackling and dancing, casting long shadows across the cobblestones.
Around the fire stood figures. Not the tall, thin creatures
from before. These were people. Adults and children, standing perfectly still,
staring at the flames.
“Mum?” Pippa whispered. “Dad?”
Penny squinted through the gloom. There, on the far side of
the fire, she could see them. Her parents, standing side by side, their faces
blank, their eyes reflecting the firelight.
“Mum! Dad!” Pippa tried to run forward, but Penny grabbed
her arm.
“Wait. Something’s wrong.”
“They’re right there!”
“I know, but look at them. Really look.”
Pippa stared at their parents. They weren’t moving, weren’t
blinking, weren’t reacting to their daughters’ voices. They just stood there,
empty and still, like dolls.
“What’s wrong with them?” Pippa’s voice cracked.
Before Penny could answer, a voice spoke from behind them. A
normal voice, not backwards, not wrong.
“They’re caught in the dream.”
Penny spun around. A boy stood there, maybe thirteen or
fourteen, with dark hair and tired eyes. He wore jeans and a hoodie, normal
clothes, and he looked as exhausted as Penny felt.
“Who are you?” Penny demanded.
“Daniel. I live on Maple Street, other side of town. Been
trying to figure this out since dawn.” He looked at Phillipa, still unconscious
between Penny and Pippa. “One of them touched her?”
“Yes. What did it do to her?”
“Put her in the dream. Same thing that happened to them.” He
nodded towards the people around the fire. “They’re all dreaming now, trapped
in whatever nightmare those things put in their heads.”
“How do we wake them up?” Pippa asked desperately.
Daniel shook his head. “I don’t know. I’ve tried everything.
Shouting, shaking them, even throwing water on my mum. Nothing works.”
Penny’s mind raced. “The mountain. The backwards voice said
the mountain will stay. This has to be connected.”
“I thought the same thing,” Daniel said. “But I can’t get
close. Every time I try, those creatures appear. They’re guarding it.”
As if summoned by his words, shapes began to emerge from the
fog. The tall, thin creatures, dozens of them, were forming a circle around the
square. Their eyeless faces turned towards the three children, their too wide
mouths stretched in grins.
“We need to get to the mountain,” Penny said, her voice
steadier than she felt. “That’s where this started, that’s where we end it.”
“How?” Daniel asked. “There are too many of them.”
Penny looked at the creatures, at the fire, at the mountain.
Wrong is right. Upside down. The rules have changed.
“We don’t fight them,” she said slowly. “We play their
game.”
“What game?” Pippa asked.
“They asked if we wanted to play, remember? Maybe that’s the
key. Maybe we have to play by their rules.”
One of the creatures stepped forward, its clicking, tapping
footsteps echoing across the square. It stopped a few metres away, tilted its
head.
“Yalp lliw uoy?” Will you play?
Penny took a deep breath, stepped forward. “Yes. We’ll
play.”
The creature’s grin widened impossibly. “Doog. Seulr eht
wonk tsum uoy.”
You must know the rules.
“What are the rules?” Penny asked.
The creature raised one long arm, pointed at the mountain.
“Pot eht hcaer. Kcab meht gnirb. Kcab og.”
Reach the top. Bring them back. Go back.
“Reach the top of the mountain, bring them back, go back,”
Daniel translated quietly. “Go back to what?”
“To before midnight,” Penny said, understanding flooding
through her. “We have to go back to before Halloween ended. That’s how we fix
this.”
“Tub,” the creature continued, its voice scraping like nails
on a chalkboard, “snoitseuq eerht rewsna tsum uoy. Gnorw rewsna, maerd eht nioj
uoy.”
But you must answer three questions. Answer wrong, you join
the dream.
“Three questions,” Pippa whispered. “Like a fairy tale.”
“Except if we get them wrong, we end up like Phillipa,”
Daniel added grimly.
Penny looked at her unconscious sister, at her parents
standing blank and empty by the fire, at all the people of Hallow trapped in
nightmares.
“We don’t have a choice,” she said. “We have to try.”
The creature gestured towards the mountain. The other
creatures parted, creating a path.
“Nigeb,” it said. Begin.
Penny, Pippa and Daniel moved forward, leaving Phillipa by
the edge of the square. Every instinct screamed at Penny to run, to grab her
sisters and hide, but she forced herself to keep walking.
They reached the base of the mountain. Up close, it was
enormous, towering above them, its surface rough and cold. A narrow path
spiralled up its side, disappearing into darkness.
At the entrance to the path stood a creature, smaller than
the others, child-sized. Its voice, when it spoke, was higher, almost sing-song.
“Noitseuq tsrif eht,” it said. The first question.
Penny braced herself.
“Thgin tsrif eht no, thgil on saw ereht. Thgil eht thguorb
tahw?”
What brought the light, there was no light on the first
night.
Penny’s mind spun. A riddle. It was asking a riddle.
“The first night,” Daniel muttered. “When there was no
light. What brought the light?”
“The sun?” Pippa suggested.
“No, wait,” Penny said, thinking hard. “The first night.
Before there was day, before there was the sun. What brought the first light?”
She thought about creation stories, about beginnings. And
then she remembered something from school, from science class.
“The Big Bang,” she said. “The first light came from the Big
Bang, from the universe being born.”
The creature tilted its head, considering. Then it stepped
aside.
“Tcerroc.”
Correct.
Penny let out a breath she hadn’t realised she was holding.
They climbed the path, the mountain rising steeply. The fog grew thicker as
they ascended, cold and damp against their skin.
Halfway up, another creature waited. This one was tall, its
limbs so long they seemed to fold in on themselves.
“Noitseuq dnoces eht,” it rasped. The second question.
“Daed era yeht tub, evil era yeht. Thgin ni klaw yeht, yad
ni peels yeht. Era yeht tahw?”
What are they? They sleep in the day, they walk at night. They
are evil, but they are dead.
“Zombies?” Pippa whispered.
“No,” Daniel said. “Zombies are undead, not dead. And the
question says they sleep in the day, walk at night.”
“Vampires,” Penny said suddenly. “They’re dead, they’re
evil, they sleep during the day and walk at night. Vampires.”
The creature’s grin widened. “Tcerroc.”
They climbed higher. Penny’s legs burned, her lungs ached,
but she pushed on. They were close now, she could feel it.
At the top of the mountain was a flat plateau, and in its
centre, a door. An actual door, wooden and ancient, carved with symbols that
hurt to look at.
Before the door stood the largest creature yet, its body
twisted and wrong, its eyeless face turned towards them.
“Noitseuq driht eht,” it said, its voice like grinding
stone. The third question.
“Uoy era tahw, em llet. Uoy dnif ot kees I, uoy ees ot kool
I. Gnihton ma I tub, gnihtyreve ma I.”
I am everything but, I am nothing. I look to see you, I seek
to find you. Tell me, what are you?
Penny’s heart sank. This was harder, more abstract. I am
everything but I am nothing. I look to see you, I seek to find you.
“A mirror?” Pippa suggested.
“No,” Daniel said. “A mirror reflects, but it doesn’t seek.”
“A shadow?” Penny tried.
The creature didn’t move, didn’t respond. Wrong answer.
Penny thought frantically. Everything but nothing. Looking,
seeking.
And then it hit her.
“A question,” she said. “You’re a question. A question can
be everything or nothing depending on the answer. A question looks for
understanding, seeks knowledge.”
The creature was silent for a long moment. Then, slowly, it
stepped aside.
“Tcerroc. Ni og won. Kcab meht gnirb.”
Now go in. Bring them back.
The door swung open, revealing darkness beyond.
Penny looked at Pippa, at Daniel. “Ready?”
They nodded, and together, the three children stepped
through the door.
Chapter 5: Inside
the Mountain
The darkness was absolute, pressing against Penny’s eyes
like a physical weight. She reached out, found Pippa’s hand, and held tight.
“Daniel?” she called.
“Here,” his voice came from her left. “I can’t see
anything.”
“Keep talking,” Penny said. “Stay close.”
They moved forward slowly, hands outstretched, feet
shuffling. The ground beneath them was smooth, cold, and the air smelled of
earth and something else, something sweet and rotten.
Then, gradually, light began to seep in. Not natural light,
but a sickly green glow that came from the walls themselves. As Penny’s eyes
adjusted, she could see they were in a tunnel, narrow and winding, the walls
covered in the same symbols from the door.
“Where are we?” Pippa whispered.
“Inside the mountain,” Penny said. “Or inside whatever the
mountain really is.”
They followed the tunnel, the green light growing brighter.
Penny could hear sounds now, distant at first, then closer. Voices. Crying.
Screaming.
“The people in the dream,” Daniel said quietly. “We’re
hearing their nightmares.”
The tunnel opened into a vast chamber, and Penny stopped,
her breath catching.
The chamber was filled with webs. Not spider webs, but
something else, threads of shadow and light woven together, stretching from
floor to ceiling. And caught in the webs, like flies, were people. Hundreds of
them, maybe thousands, their bodies wrapped in the threads, their faces twisted
in terror or grief or rage.
“Oh God,” Pippa breathed.
Penny scanned the chamber, looking for her parents, for
Phillipa. There, near the centre, she saw them. Her mum and dad, wrapped in
shadow threads, their eyes closed, their faces peaceful despite the nightmare
they were trapped in.
And beside them, Phillipa, freshly caught, the threads just
beginning to wind around her.
“We have to free them,” Penny said, moving forward.
“Wait,” Daniel grabbed her arm. “Look.”
In the centre of the chamber, where all the webs converged,
was a figure. Not one of the tall, thin creatures. This was something else,
something older.
It looked like a child, small and pale, dressed in tattered
Victorian clothes. But its eyes were ancient, black and empty, and when it
smiled, Penny saw rows of needle-sharp teeth.
“Welcome,” it said, and its voice was normal, almost
pleasant. “I’ve been waiting for you.”
“Who are you?” Penny demanded, trying to keep her voice
steady.
“I have many names. The Nightmare King. The Dream Eater. The
Halloween That Never Ends.” It giggled, a sound like breaking glass. “But you
can call me Samhain.”
“Samhain,” Daniel repeated. “The Celtic festival. The origin
of Halloween.”
“Very good,” Samhain said, clapping its small hands. “Yes, I
am the spirit of Halloween, the night when the veil between worlds grows thin.
For one night each year, I am allowed to walk, to play, to feast on fear and
delight.”
“One night,” Penny said. “Halloween ends at midnight. You’re
supposed to go back.”
Samhain’s smile faded. “Supposed to. But this year,
something changed. This year, your town celebrated so beautifully, with such
joy and such terror, that the veil didn’t just thin. It tore. And I decided I
didn’t want to go back. I decided Halloween should last forever.”
“You can’t do that,” Pippa said. “You’re hurting people,
trapping them in nightmares.”
“Nightmares?” Samhain looked genuinely confused. “These
aren’t nightmares. These are dreams. Perfect dreams where Halloween never ends,
where every night is filled with magic and fear and wonder. I’m giving them
what they want.”
“They don’t want this,” Penny said firmly. “Let them go.”
“No.” Samhain’s voice hardened. “They’re mine now. This
whole town is mine. And soon, when the sun never rises again, when Halloween
spreads beyond Hallow, the whole world will be mine.”
“That’s why the sun hasn’t risen,” Daniel said. “You’re
holding back the dawn.”
“Clever boy. As long as I’m here, as long as Halloween
continues, the sun cannot rise. The day cannot come. And without day, there is only
night. Only Halloween. Forever.”
Penny’s mind raced. They’d answered the riddles, they’d
reached the mountain, but now what? How did they stop a spirit, a force of
nature?
Go back, the creature had said. Bring them back. Go back.
“You said the veil tore,” Penny said slowly. “When did it
tear? Exactly when?”
Samhain tilted its head. “At midnight. When Halloween should
have ended, when I should have returned to my realm. But the celebration was so
strong, so powerful, that the veil couldn’t close. It tore instead.”
“So if we go back to that moment,” Penny said, “if we’re
there when the veil tries to close, maybe we can fix it. Maybe we can push you
back through.”
Samhain laughed. “You can’t go back in time, little girl.
That’s impossible.”
“Not if we’re already in a dream,” Daniel said, catching on.
“If all of this, the fog, the creatures, the mountain, if it’s all part of your
dream, your Halloween, then time doesn’t work the same way. We’re not in the
real world anymore. We’re in your world.”
“And in dreams,” Pippa added quietly, “you can go anywhere.
Even backwards.”
Samhain’s smile vanished completely. “You’re smarter than I
thought. But it doesn’t matter. Even if you could go back, even if you could
reach that moment, you can’t close the veil. You’re just children.”
“Maybe,” Penny said. “But we can try.”
She looked at the webs, at the people trapped in them, at
her family. “If we go back, if we close the veil, what happens to them?”
“They wake up,” Samhain said. “The dream ends, Halloween
ends, and everyone goes back to normal. Including me. I’ll be forced back to my
realm, trapped for another year.”
“Good,” Penny said.
Samhain’s face twisted with rage. “You would take this from
me? This perfect, endless night? You would condemn me to darkness and silence
for another year?”
“Yes,” Penny said simply. “Because this isn’t your world.
It’s ours. And we want it back.”
Samhain shrieked, a sound that shook the chamber, and the
shadow webs began to writhe. The people trapped in them moaned, their
nightmares intensifying.
“If you want to go back,” Samhain hissed, “you’ll have to go
through me.”
The creature’s small body began to change, growing,
twisting, becoming something monstrous. Its Victorian clothes tore, revealing
skin like bark, like stone. Its hands became claws, its teeth lengthened, and
its eyes, its terrible empty eyes, began to glow with green fire.
“Run!” Daniel shouted.
But Penny stood her ground. “No. We’re not running.
We’re ending this.”
She looked at the webs, at the threads of shadow and light.
Wrong is right. Upside down.
“The webs,” she said. “They’re not just trapping people.
They’re threads of time, of moments, of Halloween itself. If we can follow them
back, if we can trace them to the source…”
“We can find midnight,” Daniel finished. “We can find the
moment the veil tore.”
“But how do we follow them?” Pippa asked.
Penny looked at Samhain, now fully transformed into a
nightmare creature, advancing towards them with claws extended.
“We let it catch us,” Penny said.
“What?” Pippa and Daniel said together.
“The webs catch people and put them in dreams, in
nightmares. But dreams are made of memories, of moments. If we let the webs
catch us, if we let ourselves fall into the dream, maybe we can navigate it.
Maybe we can find our way back to midnight.”
“That’s insane,” Daniel said.
“I know,” Penny agreed. “But it’s the only way.”
Samhain was almost upon them, its claws reaching, its mouth
open in a roar.
Penny grabbed Pippa’s hand, and grabbed Daniel’s hand. “Trust
me.”
And together, they jumped into the webs.
Chapter
6: The Dream of Halloween
The webs caught them, wrapped around them, and Penny felt
herself falling. Not physically, but mentally, spiritually, falling through
layers of reality, through dreams and nightmares and memories.
She saw flashes of Halloween past. Children trick or
treating, jack-o’-lanterns glowing, parties and laughter and screams of
delight. She saw the history of the festival, saw ancient Celts lighting
bonfires, saw the veil between worlds shimmer and thin.
And she saw Samhain, year after year, walking the earth for
one night, feeding on fear and joy, then being pulled back, trapped in its
realm, waiting for the next Halloween.
Lonely, she realised. It was lonely.
The falling stopped. Penny opened her eyes.
She was standing in the town square, but it was different.
The fog was gone, the sky was clear and full of stars, and the square was
packed with people. The Halloween celebration was in full swing, music playing,
children running, and adults laughing.
“Where are we?” Pippa’s voice came from beside her.
Penny looked around. Pippa and Daniel were there, but they
were translucent, ghost-like. And the people in the square, they were walking
through them, not seeing them.
“We’re in the memory,” Penny said. “The dream of last
night.”
“Look,” Daniel pointed. “The clock.”
Above the town hall, the clock showed 11:55pm. Five minutes
to midnight.
“We made it,” Penny breathed. “We’re here.”
They moved through the crowd, watching the celebration.
Penny saw herself, her past self, laughing with Pippa, eating candy floss. She
saw Phillipa with her friends, trying to look cool but clearly having fun. She
saw her parents, actually present, actually happy, dancing together by the
Halloween mountain.
It was perfect. It was everything Penny had wanted.
And in five minutes, it would all go wrong.
“There,” Pippa said, pointing to the edge of the square.
The fog was starting to roll in, thick and unnatural. And in
the fog, shapes were forming. The tall, thin creatures, waiting.
“That’s when it happens,” Daniel said. “When the fog comes,
that’s when Samhain stays.”
The clock ticked to 11:58.
“We need to find the veil,” Penny said. “Where it tears.
That’s what we need to fix.”
They searched the square, looking for something, anything
that seemed out of place. The crowd was starting to thin, people heading home,
the celebration winding down.
11:59.
“There!” Daniel shouted, pointing at the Halloween mountain.
At its base, the air was shimmering, rippling like water.
And through the ripples, Penny could see something else. Another world, dark
and cold, full of shadows.
“The veil,” she breathed.
They ran to the mountain, pushed through the memory of people
who couldn’t see them. The shimmering grew stronger, the ripples more violent.
The clock began to chime midnight.
BONG.
On the first chime, the veil began to close, the ripples
smoothing.
BONG.
But something was wrong. The veil was fighting, resisting,
the ripples growing more chaotic.
BONG.
And then Penny saw it. Samhain, in its child form, standing
at the base of the mountain, its hands pressed against the veil, holding it
open.
BONG.
“No,” it was saying, its voice desperate. “Not yet. Not
back. Please, not back.”
BONG.
The veil was tearing, the fabric of reality splitting under
the pressure.
BONG.
“It’s scared,” Pippa whispered. “It doesn’t want to go
back.”
BONG.
Penny understood. Samhain wasn’t evil. It was lonely,
desperate, clinging to the one night it was allowed to exist.
BONG.
But that didn’t change what had to be done.
BONG.
Penny stepped forward, reached out to Samhain. Her hand
passed through its shoulder, insubstantial, but Samhain felt it. It turned, saw
her.
“You,” it said.
BONG.
“I’m sorry,” Penny said. “I know you’re lonely. I know you
don’t want to go back. But you have to.”
BONG.
“I’ll be alone,” Samhain said, and it sounded like a child,
scared and small. “In the dark. For a whole year.”
BONG.
The final chime rang out. Midnight.
The veil should have closed. But Samhain was still holding
it open, and the tear was spreading, reality fracturing.
Penny made a decision.
“You won’t be alone,” she said. “I’ll remember you. We all
will. Every Halloween, we’ll celebrate, we’ll think of you, we’ll keep the
spirit alive. You’ll never be forgotten.”
Samhain stared at her, its ancient eyes searching her face.
“You promise?”
“I promise.”
For a long moment, nothing happened. Then, slowly, Samhain
let go of the veil.
The tear began to close, reality knitting itself back
together. Samhain started to fade, being pulled back to its realm.
“Thank you,” it whispered, and then it was gone.
The veil sealed with a flash of light, and the world
lurched.
Chapter
7: The Waking
Penny gasped, her eyes flying open. She was lying on cold
cobblestones, staring up at a grey sky. No, not grey. Lightening. The sun was
rising, pale and weak, but rising.
“Pippa?” she called, sitting up.
“Here,” Pippa’s voice came from nearby. Her little sister
was sitting up too, looking dazed but alive.
“Daniel?”
“I’m okay,” Daniel said, getting to his feet. “Did it work?
Did we do it?”
Penny looked around. They were in the town square, the real
town square. The Halloween mountain was gone, just empty space where it had
stood. The fog was lifting, morning light breaking through.
And the people. The people were waking up.
All around the square, people were sitting up, blinking,
confused. Penny saw the Hendersons, the Patels, the Johnsons. She saw
neighbours and friends and strangers, all coming back to themselves.
“Penny!”
She turned. Phillipa was running towards her, tears
streaming down her face. She crashed into Penny, hugging her so tight it hurt.
“You did it,” Phillipa sobbed. “I don’t know what you did,
but you did it. I was trapped, I was in this nightmare, and then suddenly I was
waking up and you were there and”
“It’s okay,” Penny said, hugging her back. “It’s over. It’s
all over.”
“Girls!”
Their parents were pushing through the crowd, their faces
pale but alert. They reached their daughters and pulled all three into a fierce
embrace.
“What happened?” their dad asked. “The last thing I remember
is the party, and then… nothing. Just darkness and dreams.”
“It’s a long story,” Penny said. “But we’re okay. Everyone’s
okay.”
Around them, the town was coming back to life. People were
helping each other up, checking on neighbours, trying to make sense of what had
happened.
“It was like a mass hallucination,” someone was saying.
“Must have been something in the air,” another person
suggested.
“Carbon monoxide, maybe?”
Penny smiled. They didn’t remember. Or they were choosing
not to remember. Either way, life would go back to normal.
“Come on,” their mum said. “Let’s go home.”
As they walked back through the streets of Hallow, Penny
looked up at the sky. The sun was fully risen now, bright and warm, burning
away the last traces of fog.
Halloween was over.
But before they turned onto their street, Penny looked back
at the town square. For just a moment, she thought she saw a small figure
standing there, watching. A child in Victorian clothes, smiling.
Then it was gone.
“Thank you,” Penny whispered.
And she meant it.
Chapter 8: The
After
School was cancelled for the rest of the week. The official
explanation was a gas leak that had caused mass hallucinations, and while most
people seemed to accept that, Penny knew the truth.
She spent the days at home with her sisters, recovering.
Phillipa was quieter than usual, sometimes staring off into space, lost in
memories of the nightmare she’d been trapped in. Pippa had nightmares, waking
up crying about skeletons and fog.
But they were together, and they were safe, and slowly,
things began to feel normal again.
On Friday afternoon, there was a knock at the door. Penny
answered it to find Daniel standing there, hands in his pockets, looking
awkward.
“Hey,” he said.
“Hey,” Penny replied.
“I just wanted to check you were okay. You and your
sisters.”
“We’re okay. You?”
“Yeah. My parents think I imagined the whole thing, but…” He
shrugged. “I know what happened. We know.”
Penny nodded. “We do.”
They stood in silence for a moment, then Daniel said, “Do
you think it’ll come back? Next Halloween?”
“I think so,” Penny said. “But I think it’ll be different. I
think it understands now.”
“That we’re not just fear to feed on?”
“That we’re people. That we matter.”
Daniel smiled. “You’re pretty brave, you know that?”
Penny felt her cheeks warm. “I had help.”
“Still. You were amazing.” He shifted his weight, suddenly
nervous. “Maybe we could hang out sometime? When things are properly back to
normal?”
“I’d like that,” Penny said, and she meant it.
After Daniel left, Penny went up to her room. She sat at her
desk, pulled out a notebook, and began to write.
She wrote about Halloween, about the celebration and the
terror and the magic. She wrote about Samhain, about loneliness and fear, and
the need to be remembered.
And she wrote a promise.
Every Halloween, she would celebrate. She would dress up,
carve pumpkins, and tell scary stories. She would keep the spirit of Halloween
alive, not out of fear, but out of respect.
Because Halloween wasn’t about monsters or nightmares. It
was about community, about coming together, about facing fear with courage and
laughter.
It was about remembering that magic, real magic, existed in
the world.
And that was worth celebrating.
That night, as Penny lay in bed, she heard a sound outside
her window. Not scraping or clicking or tapping. Just the wind, rustling
through the trees.
But underneath it, so faint she might have imagined it, she
heard a voice.
“Uoy knaht.”
Thank you.
Penny smiled, closed her eyes, and slept.
And for the first time since Halloween, she didn’t have
nightmares.
She dreamed of autumn leaves and pumpkin patches, of
costumes and candy, of laughter echoing through streets lit by
jack-o’-lanterns.
She dreamed of Halloween as it should be.
And in her dream, a small figure in Victorian clothes
smiled, no longer alone, no longer forgotten.
The Halloween that wouldn’t end had finally, peacefully,
ended.
But its spirit, its magic, its promise?
That would last forever.
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